Wednesday, October 04, 2006

Torn

Pang vanquished all my emotions
Clutching my heart causing unbearable pain
Tearing my past behind desperation
Refusing to halt its wrath leaves me forsaken.

I struggled away from the sad reality
But I ended up distraught and desperate
As I wait for the old pomp to revive with victory
I was left in an ebbing crave's state.

With poignant memories casting a light of endless gloom
The incessant mourning eventually drives me insane
Only to break in a lonely ember's doom
I find myself cowering in so much pain.

by Rachelle Arlin Credo

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Rachelle:
This poem does not work for me in a universal manner; it feels, however, like a very strong "you" poem.
:)Kurt Kristensen
PoetSpeak Editor